Assignment 22: Elevator Pitch No.3


2. Reflection: After reading my second set of feedback I knew that the facts had to stay in, as they were doing their job of grabbing people's attention. I stayed consistent with dressing formally and I also made sure to explain exactly how the app works. 

3. Now having done it three times I definitely feel like it flows better. I definitely feel more comfortable in front of the camera and I can say that I feel more confident in delivering the pitch to an audience.


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  1. Hey Nicole. All I can say is excellent elevator pitch, you present yourself with a lot of enthusiasm and it seems like being in front of the camera for you is almost effortless. With my major, it is a constant discussion on how to properly handle the food waste dilemma here in this country. I believe your app would be a tremendous step to ultimately cut back on the sheer amount of food that is currently being wasted. Great job!

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  2. Hey Catherine! Great pitch, I really like the way you grab our attention and it seems like you are actually passionate about the product you are intending to sell. It is evident that you practiced a lot and really took our feedback well. Looks like 3rd time really is the charm because you truly caught my attention!

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