Assignment 17: Elevator Pitch No.2

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1. Link: https://youtu.be/nX3Y1RpD-VM

2. Reflection: The comments I received from my first pitch were positive. After reading them I realized that the key aspects of my presentation were 1) that I included facts to inform the audience about the situation and 2) that I dressed professionally.

3. Based on the feedback I received I decided to continue dressing "somewhat" professionally and keep the facts that I had. In addition, since all the comments also agreed with my proposition of using an app for my solution, I decided to speak further of how exactly it worked.

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  1. katelyn.kantorMarch 21, 2020 at 8:35 PM

    Hey Nicole! Great pitch, I love how you started out with some facts, it did catch my attention. You look like you have everything together and it seemed like your pitch was well rehearsed. You seemed to have taken the prior feedback really well and applied everything to this new pitch.

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  2. Devin CrimzonMarch 23, 2020 at 8:42 AM

    Nicole, good job being informative and factual in your elevator pitch. You were relatable and accurate about things going bad on the fridge. It's a problem most college students have from my experiences of going around to my friends apartments. It doesn't end there because I've seen some grown adults with messy fridges. This would be a great idea for the greater good of soceity.

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